4 Reader Comments
Every now & then..
You come across a piece that breaths;
We then learn to take a part of the drive..,
As if a wishbone sequence to light the way ahead,
Love your poetics thank you for sharing.
Well done. Well expressed. I was moved. Hope you continue to write for forever.
The reader’s glimpse into the narrator’s mind/thoughts is beautifully expressed with remarkably candid, almost harshly insistent honesty.
The story is successfully accomplished in just two verses
I love this poem!!!!
Jill's comment is perfect! I agree wholeheartedly! A new favorite of yours for me!